First Name *Last Name *Email Address *Phone *Time Zone *US - EasternUS - CentralUS - MountainUS - PacificOther / InternationalWhen are you available for Skype / Phone calls? (Check all that apply.) *Weeknights (5 pm to 8 pm)Saturday mornings (8 am to 12 noon)Sunday mornings (8 am to 12 noon)What is the PRIMARY subgenre of your WIP? (Please select 1 option, only.) *ContemporaryRomantic SuspenseHistoricalParanormalEroticaNew AdultYoung AdultChristian (aka, "Inspirational")Which HEAT LEVEL are you trying to achieve? (Please select 1 option, only.) *SweetSensualEroticLength / Target Length of your WIP. (Please select 1 option, only.) *Novella (17.5K to 40K words)Short (45K to 50K words)Long (55K to 110K words)Is this WIP complete? *YesNoHas a literary agent requested this WIP? *YesNoHas a publishing house requested this WIP? *YesNoIf your WIP received a rejection letter, please cite the reason(s). Choose all options that apply. *I have not submitted this WIP to an agent/editor."Form" rejection letter; no specific reason citedCharacterization / Internal Conflict / Emotional TensionPlotting (External Conflict, Story Pacing, Sagging Middle, Narrative Structure, Contrived Plot)Heat Level / Sexual TensionWriting style or "voice"Slow openingWrong lengthDoesn't meet subgenre guidelinesOtherWhat is your average review rating on Amazon? (Please select 1 option, only.) *I am not published / self-published.3 stars or lower4 stars or higherI have received no customer reviews.What is your reason for seeking Adrienne's help? Choose all that apply. *Improve my storytellingAttract an agent and/or publisherGet better reviewsLearn to write a different subgenreAccountability for meeting deadlines and/or achieving goalsOtherConsent for Manuscript Review *I agree to let Adrienne deWolfe read my WIP and provide constructive feedback, both verbally and in writing, for its improvement. I understand that a key consideration for my selection is that my manuscript is a COMMERCIAL ROMANCE; that it demonstrates expert English grammar; and that I have not used a translation app to convert my writing into English. I understand that my application fee is non-refundable, even if my WIP is not selected for mentorship. (However, Adrienne will send me a brief explanation, and if I am able to revise my manuscript to her specifications, I may be eligible to reapply for mentorship for the same WIP.) I also understand that my WIP remains under my copyright and that it will not be shared in any way; nor will it be replicated, except for the express purpose of editing or critiquing a section for my personal instruction. I have read, and agree to, the other Terms and Conditions, published on this website.Please upload the first 10 pages of your WIP. Be sure your excerpt is in Standard Manuscript Format (double spaced; 1 inch margins; 12 point Courier font; plus a header on every page that includes your name and your WIP's title.) *Choose FileNo file chosenDelete uploaded file Apply for Mentorship
I agree to let Adrienne deWolfe read my WIP and provide constructive feedback, both verbally and in writing, for its improvement. I understand that a key consideration for my selection is that my manuscript is a COMMERCIAL ROMANCE; that it demonstrates expert English grammar; and that I have not used a translation app to convert my writing into English. I understand that my application fee is non-refundable, even if my WIP is not selected for mentorship. (However, Adrienne will send me a brief explanation, and if I am able to revise my manuscript to her specifications, I may be eligible to reapply for mentorship for the same WIP.) I also understand that my WIP remains under my copyright and that it will not be shared in any way; nor will it be replicated, except for the express purpose of editing or critiquing a section for my personal instruction. I have read, and agree to, the other Terms and Conditions, published on this website.